Hi lesly!! Good composition but i found some mistakes,for example: I`m been considered:i have considered myself we have to acept:we have to accept I love pass: i love to pass or i love passing I like go:i like to go or i like going I love eat:i love to eat or i love eating I didn`t like vegetables:i don't like vegetables i hope that my corrections are of great use to you..bye!!
Hi lesly!!
ResponderEliminarGood composition but i found some mistakes,for example:
I`m been considered:i have considered myself
we have to acept:we have to accept
I love pass: i love to pass or i love passing
I like go:i like to go or i like going
I love eat:i love to eat or i love eating
I didn`t like vegetables:i don't like vegetables
i hope that my corrections are of great use to you..bye!!
ONE DAY MY MOTHER " SAID TO ME " ,
ResponderEliminarIN OTHER RESPECTS I AGREE WHIT KATIA
ResponderEliminarBECAREFULL